casino125
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| Subject: I Hate Loving You August 27th 2009, 14:46 | |
| [My latest work]
I Hate Loving You....
It started out pretty swell, but as time went by it felt like you dropped me down a well you've sprung your trap, now I'm caught in your spell. Am I doomed to spend forever in this hell? Bound by the chains of commitment to the walls of my cell, this love is a prison I'm cursed to always dwell. Thats not the worst part, no what I really hate is. OH! I hate! How you left me alone! I hate! Not being with you! I hate! Not seeing you at all! I hate! Not hearing your voice! But thats not the worst pat no, thats not what I hate the most. I hate loving you. Oh... Shouldn't we be more than this?All I ask for is just once kiss. Starting to think singleness was a bliss. Wish I gave this relationship a miss. I didn't think it would lead me to this dark abyss, in which I am easily dismissed. Thats not the worst part, no what I really hate is. OH! I hate! How you left me alone! I hate! Not being with you! I hate! Not seeing you at all! I hate! Not hearing your voice! But thats not the worst pat no, thats not what I hate the most. I hate loving you. I swear I love you, but thats what kills me, I'm dying here can't you see? How I long to be free, just let me go let me be. So I get down on my knee, and I plea. Please don't make me break your heart, don't make me take this apart. Help me make this work, show me a sign, give me a reason. I can't do this alone I need you, but your making it hard. so hard just to love you. Thats why... I hate loving you.
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