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PostSubject: I Hate Loving You   August 27th 2009, 14:46

[My latest work]

I Hate Loving You....

It started out pretty swell, but as time went by it felt like you dropped me down a well
you've sprung your trap, now I'm caught in your spell. Am I doomed to spend forever in this hell?
Bound by the chains of commitment to the walls of my cell, this love is a prison I'm cursed to always dwell.
Thats not the worst part, no what I really hate is.
OH! I hate! How you left me alone!
I hate! Not being with you!
I hate! Not seeing you at all!
I hate! Not hearing your voice!
But thats not the worst pat no, thats not what I hate the most.
I hate loving you.
Oh...
Shouldn't we be more than this?All I ask for is just once kiss.
Starting to think singleness was a bliss. Wish I gave this relationship a miss.
I didn't think it would lead me to this dark abyss, in which I am easily dismissed.
Thats not the worst part, no what I really hate is.
OH! I hate! How you left me alone!
I hate! Not being with you!
I hate! Not seeing you at all!
I hate! Not hearing your voice!
But thats not the worst pat no, thats not what I hate the most.
I hate loving you.
I swear I love you, but thats what kills me, I'm dying here can't you see?
How I long to be free, just let me go let me be.
So I get down on my knee, and I plea.
Please don't make me break your heart, don't make me take this apart.
Help me make this work, show me a sign, give me a reason.
I can't do this alone I need you, but your making it hard.
so hard just to love you. Thats why...
I hate loving you.

[As always criticism and comments are well appreciated.]
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